Great stuff, Zach! Really enjoyed this post! Your voice shines through, and you let the reader into a slice of your life. You're clearly improving with every post, so Keep Up The Excellent Work!
The only thing I'd add in future pieces is the song itself (i.e. pasting the song / vid into your article). I'm certainly old enough to know China Grove, but if your readers tend to be closer to your age, they may not be familiar with it. Include the song you're referencing next time so your readers have a chance to enjoy it as well. :)
Great stuff, Zach! Really enjoyed this post! Your voice shines through, and you let the reader into a slice of your life. You're clearly improving with every post, so Keep Up The Excellent Work!
The only thing I'd add in future pieces is the song itself (i.e. pasting the song / vid into your article). I'm certainly old enough to know China Grove, but if your readers tend to be closer to your age, they may not be familiar with it. Include the song you're referencing next time so your readers have a chance to enjoy it as well. :)